Emily Dickinson’s “A Bird Came Down the Walk”

By Corey March 8, 2008 10 comments

Emily Dickinson is one of the first poets I can remember admiring. I’m not sure whether it was her near rhymes, her lifeAmerican Robin story, her often understated but amazing imagery, or the fact that she really wasn’t appreciated as a poetic genius until after her death: whatever it is that drew me to her poetry, I’m hooked. “A Bird Came Down the Walk” is her best-known poem that contains a bird and includes images that truly capture the character of birds in her usual, simple way. I always picture the bird in this poem as an American Robin, simply because of the behavior described, but it could be any of a host of avians.

A Bird came down the Walk –
He did not know I saw –
He bit an Angleworm in halves
And ate the fellow, raw,

And then he drank a Dew
From a convenient Grass –
And then hopped sidewise to the Wall
To let a Beetle pass –

He glanced with rapid eyes
That hurried all around –
They looked like frightened Beads, I thought –
He stirred his Velvet Head

Like one in danger, Cautious,
I offered him a Crumb
And he unrolled his feathers
And rowed him softer home –

Than Oars divide the Ocean,
Too silver for a seam –
Or Butterflies, off Banks of Noon
Leap, plashless as they swim.

The first two stanzas of the poem are a simple description of the bird, not knowing it is being watched by the poet, being a bird. The third stanza is where Dickinson really hits her stride. The bird’s “rapid eyes…hurried all abroad” is a darn good description of a bird on alert for predators. And while comparing the bird’s eyes to “Beads” seems to make the bird less alive the fact that the beads are “frightened,” while perhaps overly humanizing the bird, captures the look I’ve seen birds have when they noticed my presence (though the non-poetical would probably use “wary” as the adjective). The bird must have been made wary by Dickinson coming forward to offer it a crumb.

The bird, of course, refuses the crumb and “unrolled his feathers / And rowed him softer home.” Anyone who has seen crows fly across the sky can appreciate comparing birds’ wings in flight to oars: in fact the simplest way I was taught to remember what a crow looks like in flight is “Row, row, row, your crow.”

But Dickinson takes the analogy of the bird’s wings rowing through the air a step further and tiptoes towards whimsy when she extends her metaphor to “Butterflies, off Banks of Noon, / Leap, plashless, as they swim.” The sky becomes the sea and butterflies, at high noon, leap into the air without a splash, a delightful image to this poetry-aficionado and a wonderful way to end the poem.

If you like this poem by Emily Dickinson, and I hope you do, why not explore more of her work?

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About the Author

Corey

Corey

Corey is a lifelong upstate New Yorker who recently took the plunge and moved to the city. He's only been birding since 2005 but has garnered a respectable life list and broke the magical 300 barrier in New York State in 2007 by birding whenever he wasn't working as a union representative. He lives near Forest Park in Queens with Daisy and their two indoor cats, Hunter and B.B.

10 Responses to “Emily Dickinson’s “A Bird Came Down the Walk””

  1. I adore Dickenson and her poetry with birds is especially pleasing to me. Thanks for sharing!

  2. Thanks for sharing Dickinson. I am a long time birder, my Dad was a Biologist and long time birder, my Grand-dad was an outdoors-man and liked birds.

  3. such an amazing poem! I had never heard this one before! Thanks for sharing!

  4. Very nice poem and thanks for sharing it, but it is cause for concern:

    Are these the kind of posts we can expect from you now, READING on your way to work instead of being out and about in upstate NY getting some BIRDING done?

    It seems those who know me don’t need enemies (as the saying goes in Germany)

  5. Well, I am not much of a poet-lover, but this poem is a good one and now I will always think of a robin!

    Good birding to you!

  6. Thanks everyone…and Jochen, I was nearly upstate today, taking the subway as far north as one can I got to…the Bronx.

  7. Excellent post! I too love Dickinson & that poem in particular. It captures so well both the beauty & terror of nature in a perfect miniature, then broadens to the grand description of the flight. A poet myself, I’ve written about birds occasionally myself. It’s a real challenge to capture something essential about a bird in language.

  8. People who love birds and words nearly always love Emily Dickinson. She also said to a friend, I hope you love birds, too. It is economical. It saves going to Heaven.”

  9. Just wanted you to know I was posting on my interior design blog on a topic totally unrelated to birds (4/24/08) but mentioned Emily Dickinson’s poem and linked to this post. Hope that was ok. Noticed you’re from Upstate Ny - I grew up in Auburn. On a bird note - last year my husband and I saw a male Baltimore Oriole in our Arlington VA backyard. Very exciting!

  10. @Michele: It’s more than ok, it’s great! Feel free to link whenever you want!

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